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Alias: Anthracite Age: 20 Sexuality: Bisexual Height: 175 cm Weight: 68 kg Hair: Fuzzy, somewhat messy black hair Eyes: Amber orange Skin & Scars: Burn marks on her palms
Details
Yngrid is a young female with a mild healthy pink skin colour with a pitch black hair contrasting her face. Her hair goes down from the top and stretches outwards lowerhalf. Her hair reaches to her neck at most and generally stays like that without much effort. She has a slim build with a small hint of muscles, most notably around her waist and back. She does not paint her nails or add make up on.
Personality
"i am seen as someone disposable, a piece of coal if you will, but i wont let that stop me from moving a train!"
Positives & Likes
✔ Optimistic ⤊ Mutual Respect ✔ Headclear ⤊ Helping More Than Asked For ✔ Loyal ⤊ Donate ✔ Generous ⤊ Observing Animals ✔ Kind ⤊ Lobster Stew
Negatives & Dislikes
✖ Hot-headed ⤋ Powerhungry People ✖ Impulsive ⤋ Violent People ✖ Over Critical ⤋ Parsnip Soup ✖ Intolerant ⤋ Arrogance ✖ Naive ⤋ Stealing Her Hat
Behaviour
"Yngrid likes to give more than to take, with a optimistic mindset on her life she spends time on focusing whats good for her and others. She's a hard worker with a kind approach to anyone she meets, she believes everyone can be good until proven otherwise. With much life in her she can sometimes be eager for the smallest things, but once she has a priority in mind she won't let that focus falter to anything else, not even her most favourite dish."
History
"It was 20 years ago since Yngrid was born and seeing the light for the first time of Ordus. In the small village side of Tidegate she was an only child to her parents who worked as farmers by the coast. But it was already planned that they'll return back to Vantalux to her grandfather's farm, which her father inherited. This farm was decently big, and quite old. It's been a family staple and her father wanted to carry on this family through these tough times in Ordus.
Growing up on the farm meant there was many opportunities for Yngrid to explore what good work truly is like. Her father often allowing the young eager girl to help him whenever she could, everything from watering their crops to carrying heavy objects across the field. But when it was not working days she still tried to do her best and make life easier for her parents, even when it was Yngrid herself that needed help most of the time. But with enough time and proper parenting she was accomplishing tasks and aided her father with much greater results. However, in busy times when her father didn't have much freetime Yngrid felt obligated to help her father more than ever. She knew he was growing older and as thus making her motivated to attempt the more risky tasks around the farm. She knew of her Vel and what it did, but she was naive and not very knowledgable about consequences. In a brave attempt to heat the oven early in the morning, before her father waking up, she accidentally ignited near her skin, where a thin layer of coal dust is naturally produced on her, engulfing her hands into a small pair of flaming orbs. It horrified her and resulted her being sent to the hospital, an entire week imprisoned a place where she has put more stress and worries on her father. With this tremendous guilt building on her shoulders she yet tried to do her best to make it up for her father, so she began to write him letters, everyday, with warm words and encouragement, even if she wasn't good at writing it didn't stop her keep on going and going.
Years go by and it was coming to an age where she needed to go out into the city more and get herself a proper stand in the world. As much as she wanted to help her parents and their farm Yngrid insisted to go to a place where she could truly exceed her abilities. While being somewhat short and very young for work she was accepted in a long going factory, probably one of the older ones since it used a traditional method of using coal ovens to produce their forges of iron. Being an Emes she knew using her unique power in public was a mighty bad idea. She felt a tremendous pressure knowing that they could kick her out in any second, she didn't know better and always thought they could seek out Emes. However, Yngrid kept a strong confident face, being just a normal girl who does honest work with the rugged old workers.
Her days of working in the factory came to an end after a year and a half as she was feeling stuck in a stalemate. She could be working in this factory for years with no one knowing of her powers, but she didn't wanna feel limited, because she knew the gift in her body could be turned into something greater, use her own strength to help those in need, for she has seen the life for some people and it made her feel sick and anxious. She quit her job and pursued a higher form of learning, an University where she could learn more about herself and what she truly wanted to do with her future as a helper of mankind.
Through her dedication to knowledge and strict discipline, despite the lack of care she recieved from her superiors and colleagues, Yngrid had finally crossed the finish line! Assuming the presitgious and honourable position of an Enforcer, she could finally express her Vel and take full advantage of it."
"Terras is a Bolt Axe made out of Vanta and refined black iron. It's main properties is it's weight and supporting handles. It was gifted to Yngrid upon her approval of becoming an Enforcer. It was specifically designed for Yngrid's strength and her big swings and solid strikes. Yngrid has used big tools and carried heavier stuff in her life so equipping this Bolt Axe is practically becoming a part of her at first grip."
Ability
"Terras is first notably pretty heavy for most Vanta Weapons, it's purpose is to deliver powerful single strikes and using it's weight added with the strength of the user to deliver shattering forces. It does not equip with any fancy mechanic or has any additional form. It has the basic appearance as a big axe with bigger handles. It can be used with one or two hands depending on the attack, with it's size however it can be a suitable shield. It has the width and durability to withstand great forces applied to it.
It's gimmick is just as straight forward as the blade of the axe. At the tip is a solid cone shaped object with the most weight to it compared to the rest of the weapon. Yngrid is able to hold the Bolt Axe an alternative way, holding a smaller handle at the upperhalf and equipping it as if it was a gauntlet, making it an effective weapon to shatter large masses, in this case it is a perfect alternative for her to crush her own produced coal stone into dust and filling the area with thick black fog. And instead of using the blade to break something open she can use the metal cone to penetrate the surface with a greater result, such as breaking through a locked door or break a wooden shield into pieces."
black gem
Vel Rank 1 - Emitting
Power
"Black Gem is a power that allows the user to produce a great amount of coal stone out from their body. Hard, sharp, rough coal growing out from the skin and extracting carbon from the body. It's weight and durability benefits Yngrid greatly with how quickly she can produce it from her arms. It's durable mass can recieve pressures big enough to shatter wood, however it is not as durable as solid average rock. She can create masses enough to cover her upperbody and turn her arms into large golem arms, a suitable way of adding protection. The coal stone can also be shattered by blunt heavy objects, creating large dustclouds that are difficult to inhale, similar to a worker's condition in a coalmine.
It burns easily and can gather great heat, producing energy and warmth, but Yngrid can't control coal as if it is her own body. She can only produce the mass and let it stay on, or focus her production on her palm and generate a growing mass infront of her, which leads to another neat feature she can perform. If she gets close enough to someone and pin them against a wall or any hard surface she can produce the coal stone at a rapid rate and grow it around the victim's body, effectively limiting their movement, and without strength they are practically locked."
Disadvantages
"Just like coal in general it can produce alot of heat, the kind of heat that Yngrid can't handle, and to put out the heat/fire on the pitch black rock she is forced to take it off from her body. This also applies to her body, she is in a constant state of being ignited easily, not as much as actual coal burning, but with a layer of coal dust existing on her skin it's not hard to get a fire going on her body.
Similar to fire, water or other moisty substances also has a negative effect on her Vel. Coal relies on being dry and spread soot once broken in pieces, but when drenched in water it barely shatters and instead just cracks, and coal dust is negated by wet air. However it does not stop her from producing coal and use it's durable trait."
And of course producing such amounts often results in a much quicker hunger rate, Yngrid extracts alot of carbon from her body and adds it into the coalstone to make it grow, but in return draining her of energy, so overusing her production can make her incapable of making a proper amount when exhausted."
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Last Edit: Nov 12, 2019 17:04:27 GMT by Yngrid Reiner
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Military Abilities
core strength
Star Rank: ★
Description:
"Yngrid has been focusing on strengthening her own body long before she was put into hard work. She liked to carry heavy objects with her arms and staying productive in the forging factories at the age of 16, carrying bags full of iron on her shoulders up to 100 kg, because she believed the more she could carry the more work could get done. This has given her the strength capable to penetrate through solid wood with her fist."
military ability name
Star Rank: ★
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Military Ability Name
Star Rank: Number.
Description:
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Military Ability Name
Star Rank: Number.
Description:
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Talents
Calligraphy
Star Rank: ★
Description:
"In her times of being unable to work or simply hospitalized she needed something to make time go forward. With very little resources and overall no available entertainment she thought to herself maybe write a bunch of letters to people she knew. With her Vel power she added fine coal dust to her fingertips and used it to draw word after word on sheets of old paper donated by one of the nurses she knew. She was barely able to read at that young of an age, but as years went by it became a hobby, something she enjoyed to practice when she was about to go to bed. This hobby of hers was especially encouraged by her parents, since they believed having a good writing hand meant many possibilities for better work in the future."
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Star Rank: ★
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Star Rank: ★
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Star Rank: Number.
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Talent Name
Star Rank: Number.
Description:
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Talent Name
Star Rank: Number.
Description:
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It is my pleasure to inform you that you have been accepted into the world of Ordus as a Lawful Enforcer! I look forward to seeing you uphold the law, bring down the wretched, and keep the peace!
Good luck in your future endeavors and welcome to Surrender Dawn!
